首先先要說明越來越多的人擁有了私家車。(必然趨勢)
First there r more and more families own a car or more.
解釋爲什麼會有這樣的趨勢。
原因 1私家車比較方便 2國名生活條件的提高 3身份的象徵 等等。
Because it's more convenient to hang out when u have car. u can go anywhere u want and no need to worry about u will miss the train or bus and then wait for a long time.(因爲當你擁有一輛車時，出遊更方便，不用擔心耽誤火車或者巴士，然後再花很多時間去等)
otherwise there are more and more people get rich now. The cars r not like before that only a few people can some people think get a car is a sign that u r one of the rich guys.(另外越來越多的人變的富有，車子也不想從前只有少部分人能買到，而且一些人認爲有輛車是富有的`標誌)
然後敘述一下車子的弊端
But as we all know the Car exhaust lead the problem of Global Warming.(但是衆所周知，汽車的廢氣導致了全球變暖)
And too manys cars in the road cause the Traffic jam. (而且太多車在路上造成交通堵塞)
another problem is we need more place to parking the cars. The cars Occupy more space with our public space.(還有一個問題是我們需要跟多地方停車，車子佔據了我們更多公共空間)
接下來闡明你的觀點
1 支持私家車 2 不支持私家車 (在這裏建議選擇第二個，因爲在環保的大前提下，低碳生活最重要。)
And my opinion is cars bring us the convenient but it also bring the Environmental the long term i think we should contral the number of cars.(我的觀點是，汽車帶給我們方便的同時也帶來了環境問題，從長遠角度看我們要控制汽車數量)
最後點題
we cant stop that more and more families own a car but we need consider the problem that cause from cars.(我們無法阻止越來越多的家庭買車，但是我們至少要考慮下車子帶給我們的問題)
