A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior high school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.
When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty in Learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation. I could not get high marks and my grammar was not right at all. Frustrated and afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class. When Miss Li found out my situation, she encouraged me and lent me a hand. She patiently taught me English grammar, helped me understand how to write a good sentence,and lent me many English books and magazines, which rapidly improved my English. With her help, I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.
Miss Li, like a shining star, shines in my path of success.
一個好老師對學生來說就像一顆閃亮的星。李老師，我高中時的英語老師，就是我生命中一顆閃亮的星。
剛上高中時，我英語學得很吃力。我不敢在公開場合開口說英語，因爲我的.語音、語調很糟糕。英語成績很差’，語法一蹋糊塗。灰心、失望、羞於被嘲笑，所以英語課上我從來不單手回答問題。李老師發現我的情況後，向我伸出了援助之手，鼓勵我。她認真地教我語法，教我如何寫好句子，還借給我許多英語書和雜誌。這一切都使得我很快提高了英語水平。在她的幫助下，我漸漸對英語感興趣了，成績也提高了。
李老師，就像一顆閃亮的星照耀着我前進的道路。
