【範文】
Last month I went to an amusement park, because I had an excellent grade on my final exam. At the beginning when we drove through the gate, I throught what a magnificent gate. The gate was huge and decorated with many fancy things, such as fake jewelleries, and shinning glass. On the way to the entrance, I could see some wild animals wondering on the place, just like lions, elephants, and hippoes. Also there are iron fences to block them , I still felt exited,
When we entranced the amusement park, I was shocked by what appeared to my venders were dressed in colorful and fanny costumes. The souvenir shops were selling things that I’ve never seen before. The roller coaster was so scary and exciting. We tried almost everything in the amusement park, and none of them was boring.
At the end of the day, we were having dinner in the stylish restaurant. The waiters and waitresses were beautiful and handsome, and the food was owe some too. Everything in the restaurant was well designed, such as the tables, chairs and the utensils. We sat next to the window, so we could see the night view of the whole amusement park How beautiful it is! I throught.
After I came home, I could still remember the moment clearly when I saw the night view. It was such a wonderful day for me.
【譯文】
上個月我去了遊樂園,因爲我有一個很好的成績在我的期末考試。初當我們開車穿過大門,我走過一個宏偉的大門。門口是巨大的和裝飾着許多的東西,比如假基本上,閃閃發光的玻璃。門口的路上,我能看到一些野生動物疑惑的地方,就像獅子、大象和河馬。也有鐵圍欄阻止他們,我仍然感到退出,
當我們陶醉在遊樂園,我震驚了我的眼睛。服務員都穿着五顏六色的和範妮的服裝。紀念品商店賣東西,我從來沒有見過的。過山車太可怕的和令人興奮的。我們嘗試了幾乎所有的遊樂園,沒有一個人很無聊。
在一天結束的`時候,我們在時髦的餐廳吃飯。服務員和女服務員是美麗的和英俊的,食物也欠一些。在餐廳的一切都是精心設計的,如桌子、椅子和用具。我們坐在窗戶旁邊,所以我們可以看到整個遊樂園的夜景是多麼美麗啊!我走過。
我回家後,我仍然可以記得時刻顯然當我看到夜景。這對我來說是一個愉快的一天。
