關於食品安全的英語作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Food

Poisoning Accident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline

(given in Chinese) below:

你的幾個同學因食用了從某超市買回的`食品而中毒，幸虧及時治療而脫險。請描述他(們)中毒與脫險的過程，並呼籲要加強食品安全。

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行文思路

本題屬於情景式命題。提綱要求描述一件事情的經過，由此可判斷本文應爲記敘文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：交待食物中毒的背景和原因;敘述中毒的和脫險的經過;談談由此引發的感想，呼籲加強食品安全。

高分範文

A Food Poisoning Accident

Last month, I [1]witnessed a food poisoning accident [2]happening to my classmates. At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent.

Though finally they got out of danger, this accident [3]is still vivid in my mind.

That day was Julie’s birthday, one of my classmates. In order to celebrate it, her roommates bought a big birthday cake

for her from a supermarket nearby. They shared the cake happily. [4]However, after a while, all of them felt abdominal pain, nausea and dizziness. Two of them even

cannot stand up because of great pain. We [5]rushed to send them to the hospital. [6]It turned out that the cake they ate had expired its guarantee period. Futunately, [7]due to timely treatment, they all recovered very soon.

[4]However, this accident [8]leaves me a deep ponder. I think it is very urgent to take effective measures to improve food safety.

[4]Firstly, the government should [9]strengthen supervision and administration on food safety. [4]More importantly, to those who immoral businessmen, more strict punishment should be given. [4]Besides, we consumers should be more careful in buying food. [10]Only in this way can we make sure that no same accident happens.